Night Terrors

I know you had this in the critique folder for awhile. I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get to it. Please forgive me. Your patience has been appreciated.

Vision: I get what you were going for here and I think you planned your composition well. Could have maybe given more substance to her nightmares. It could have been a chance to show something about the character without telling us. You know, a chance to story-tell with a single panel is a strength any comic artist should hone. The giant eddy is my favorite, considering how tightly she's clutching that teddy.

Originality: An anamorphic bunny hugging a teddy surrounded by her creepy nightmares? Yeah, I think that would classify as pretty damn original.

Technique: The emotion in her expression is wonderful! But then things feel... rushed. You went through the trouble of drawing the depth of the piece with your lines but did not follow through with any of your shading - at least, not in earnest. It was all or nothing cross hatching, which I feel lessens the depth and flattens the piece as a whole. Which is a damn shame, because I think the depth (the vastness of the fear and terror) you were hinting at with your lines would have been so awesome. For example, some of the creatures further back could have been more shrouded in shadow the further away they are from the light source.

Impact: I can feel the emotion that you're trying to convey here. It is creepy and it is disturbing.

All in all, good work, Tiger.